leftover dreams

[osojaded]

woke up this morning

feeling a bit ill at ease.

seemed like i lost something

when i was asleep.

a cold gnawing hunger

that was akin to despair

had laid down his head

and began to rest there.

under cascading images,

beneath a downpour of words

stars made of wishes

that only i heard.

in a world of forgotton

only whispers occur.

[maggot]

Ok, well that makes me feel better..I thought I had screwed up

[osojaded]

i didn't know if i did it right, and i liked this one better

[maggot]

The other version disappeared... I don't know if you removed it or there was a glitch...

[maggot]

You still got it. :~)